Will you leave ?

You take your jacket and begin to take a slow walk,
And the hands of clock freeze in the eternal winter,
That has begun with the passage of our day, slowly fading,
Into the darkness of a gloomy night’s heat that’ll burn the garden,
As your frail time, moves a strong you into your bright doom,
I finally look up, and close my eyes; is it the end?

Like the tyrant ruler, this moment makes me a slave,
To the memories that re-live, like a flash back,
As the guards chain me in this mirage of paradise,
All I see is the long black strands of silk that move,
Like the curtains that have fallen on my helpless fate,
My heart murmurs through your deafening silence; will you leave?


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15 responses to “Will you leave ?”

  1. Wow… Very deep sense of feeling I got while reading this. I feel as if this was written just for me and my situation. Thank you thank you thank you. I ask myself that question every day. “Will you leave?”

    1. Thnx 4 reading Romy.

  2. SiD

    PhEw!!! ThAts iS GoOd!

  3. Pradnya Adhikari

    Hey nice one…like it! Keep Writing

    1. Thnx Pradnya. U keep reading, I’ll keep writing.

  4. Reshma

    I just loved it. The tyrant rule, the moment is simply awesome. I can feel your emotions as I read the lines. Simply amazing.

    1. Thanks Reshma 🙂

  5. Akanksha Sharma

    wow, I guess we need to talk at length now.
    someone seems to be heart=broken to me. :p

    1. Will wait for your call. 🙂

      1. Akanksha Sharma

        lol, that was quite an interesting and unexpected reply.
        Maybe, we’ll do that someday! Amen!

  6. Kirti

    This poem brought tears in my eyes. I can so relate to this poem. You have painted the picture beautifully.
    I loved the line – “My heart murmurs through your deafening silence; will you leave?”
    Speechless.

    1. The aim of this poem is to share the feeling. It feels good to know that the emotion has been transferred.
      Thanks for reading 🙂

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